Wednesday, April 8, 2009

Ode to Earth

frozen cities,
no more snow,
too late for
I told you so’s.
Just the ash,
and filthy air
on the earth
that once was there.
trampled souls
upon the ground
where at one time
life was found.
But who put us in this place?
no one but the human race.
no one but our proud ancestors
no one but our sons and daughters.
pointing fingers
place the blame
but in the end
its all the same.
The words that come
from you and me
can also come
from he or she.
So take a look
at what you’re doing
see the trouble that you’re brewing.
see the things you can make right
and we may rest in peace tonight.

2 comments :

  1. Mike Morin said...

    Leeya,

    You are being too hard on yourself. All youngsters have trouble understanding themselves and the world, and their relation to it. The transition to adulthood (independence from parents, elders, separation from your friends)can be even more troubling.

    You are a talented thirteen year old. You need to find direction for engaging those talents.

    Take a look at my web log www.peoplesequityunion.blogspot.com

    With permission from your parents, please feel free to contact me at mlarosamorin@earthlink.net and/or (541)343-3808.

    Hope is a thin sliver of sunlight, but if we all work together, maybe she can break through the polluted clouds.

  2. ¥αβά said...

    Have no idea who the guy is above,
    but I happened to fully love that piece of literature. It was well-written, and so authentically composed.

    Lol. Don't I sound smart?